It dont look to bad from the pic.
Is it the misty corners and the little bit in the "g"? Is that the problem?
I painted mine almost the same way you did but i used wide blue masking tape and slowly and gently cut the letters out with a sharp xcato knife.
It worked out pretty good that way.
I remember somebody here has their gate brush stripped around the letters and i think around the indentation.
That looked pretty good, and might help clean up some ugly edges.
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